Wow! I was reading through your post but as soon as I hit the play button, I was absorbed into your words. Life is a gradual process, if you move to fast, you might end up in a ditch. Everything will be fine in the end.

Personally I feel it'd be better the song is placed closer to the start or middle of the write-up. It conveys a better emotional connection while reading through, just my thought though 😁

Greetings!