"In this very instance,
you will see time fly by.
In this very instance,
memories will overlap existence."
This. I think that the thought of memories overlapping existence is a conflict of some of us, whose longing for past times, or maybe the missing of people, can even be blinding while time keeps ticking as you write so eloquently.
"Death is true, death is real,
fakeness only fainted there."
I sympathize very much with this fragment because what I can take from it is that only in death, fakeness will disappear, which blew my mind.
Other thoughts that came to my mind while reading it were:
Love the imagery, and how nature references were a central subject in it.
You are a true magician with words, your poem took me on a rollercoaster of sensations and arguments, and I was glad of how it advanced.
Thanks for sharing! Best wishes.
RE: "Lonely eyes" (Original Poem)