I love a good encouraging, hopeful poem. The struggle to prove ourselves beautiful and then to show it to the world is one of the oldest pages in the book, but yet, I appreciate your approach, and I share it.
Continue to be unapologetic, and in peace, giving to yourself understanding, patience, acceptance, and kindness. I think this is the easiest way to build a strong image of self, and then that helps to achieve your goals.
Your poem inspired me! Keep it up!