This was a very well written essay on the reflection of Bylund's writing and your views on the matter. With no headings it was tough to find the main points and be able to preface what the essay was about, however, it was a very extensive which made it easy to understand your thoughts on the subject.

I agree with your essay saying that it is important to understand the fundamentals of economics and how crucial the people apart of it are.

economic theory is crucial for comprehending the economy because it enables us to make sense of the intricate relationships between people, organizations, and governments.

I believe it is helpful information to know whether you are apart of the marketplace ot just viewing or interacting from the outside. Showing the correlation between happiness and knowledge was very interesting and can show how eye-opening economics and the market can be. I also agree with the view that while it is an extremely complex system, it is important that economics is able to flow and mesh with society and not to be too restricting to its individuals involved. Reading this essay and Bylund's work has taught me a lot about what economics is and how its intricate system works. I never realized how important competition was within economics, always thought it was one versus the other but the competition aspect actually helps grow the market and in some ways can be beneficial to both parties involved. It proves that every part of the economy can grow and function with each other to create a nice flow. The details in your essay helped to get a better understanding of economics.

Your essay is very well written and shows that you have a deep understanding of the material by Bylund. I would suggest adding some headers to highlight the main points of the essay as stated earlier. Block quotes also help the text stand out which can be very beneficial, especially in longer essays. and help show what parts of Bylund's writing stood out to you and that you are sharing your opinion about. I did not understand formatting on Hive at all at the beginning but the video really helped. Overall fantastic essay, formatting could just help take it to the next level!