ohhhhhhh! ohhhhh damnnn Oivas this full on got me! You take us into the depths, and with a story put together so well there is, like the boys find when the dog runs off, no turning back.

The idea of the banter in the first half as bravado and the two friends procrastinating is just brilliant, and you bring this together so well, and oh my word, excuse me a moment cos I am still reeling from this, you have just done too good a job of making this captivating, i will pulled into every moment of it!

It just feels like such a complete story. The tension rises to a fever pitch, and breaks out in a to a run for their lives, only broken by the tat tat relief in a headlong dash into the arms of Anton's father. It feels like it fits so well into the way they were almost sneaking, wanting to be back before anyone knew they were gone, then that ending. Tied up with a bow, like a pro that! ;)