RE: RE: Shiro- The Cursed My Entry for #finishthestory
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RE: Shiro- The Cursed My Entry for #finishthestory

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The depth here is just amazing, the history, the bloodlines, the way you set up with his mother, it brings so much to it and I would love to hear the rest of this adventure.

I just love how the vendor talks to him, the friendly assumption, as though he is one of them, it is instant immersion, and then Holy Hearts! What an exclamation! Ahh sarez, you are a master of this snippet of a full world stuff. I haven't been well at all, and trying to keep a requested low profile, but ahhhh, so glad i caught this. You have transformed this market into a melting pot of magic, roma travelers, a man wrestling with his own powers, with no idea of who or what he is, or how to control it once again fleeing, fear hot on his heels. just brilliant, as always, as always <3

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@calluna: The depth here | Ecency