As always, your writing is astounding, the way you pace this, taking the darkest turns down this old monastery, to lead us to a crypt of horrifying secrets. Glad you went for porn, it was begging for it lol

But there is a really touch here that, phew, had to be remarked on. Thoram has raised Flynn, and it shows. "That's mine" - the suitcase only opened at night, took me a moment to get it, but my word. Real skill. You go dark, and yiou do it immaculately