Haha thank you, I did enjoy the descriptions and trying to create a relationship between them and an undercurrent of a story, but i am still not confident it worked as a mechanism to actually tell the story.

But hey I didn't say your Hugo was actually going to do that! 😜 Just the implication in your finishthestory of him thinking about it really hit home, the timing of the question, and the context of the conversation, made it seem like he was thinking about it as an option. But then you explained that it was just something you would ask, and actually most people maybe would wonder if the experience beyond the physical dying hurts. Although then I do wonder what the implication would be if we knew for sure. It's a good thing Hector gave him a vague answer, as always 😉 I had thought with the burden he was carrying, and the question Hector had asked him, that maybe if was something he had, at dark points, thought about before but I can be wrong 😜 Your fts was really good, you took us into the grit of a moment and forced us to think about things people maybe avoid.

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