Oh! Damn! You completely managed this! A well weighted story, the flows from start to finish, and remains positive all the way. There are a few translation hiccups, but I only noticed them rereading it

Awww! Thank you!!! This scary little girl says it best haha

The Pink Spiders aren't really proper punk, more pop punk, but punk is impossible not to love really, I mean clearly all it takes is the right introduction ;) awww i am glad you enjoyed it I met PG in

well @dirge, no one dies, and nothing terrible happens, to anybody, at all. It's 100% not horror, and you are like... made of horror.... you deserve some kind of award for this... The idea of this poopy

and everything has to be sweet and nice and only good things happen. it feels like lying haha

@maparari you always, always surprise me, in our rounds dripping in horror, creepiness and suspense, you provide a pool of laughter and light heartedness, and in a round asking for just that, i did not

You open this with such beautiful description of the two old men, John's grey hair, Carl being bald as a frog is a great line, it comes in so light hearted. The idea of them looking back on the summer,

Awww woo yeah, so glad you spotted that, i did like that doughnut one tehehe, I very nearly gave you a shout out at the end, pretty certain it was your ending last week that had the retrospective approach

haha ahhh I very much enjoyed this, the way you set out, the mention of not eating heavy stuff at first had me wondering about the costume (could someone be carrying the other person...?), then the performance

oh what!!! <3<3 thank you so very much! <3

I very much managed a positive ending, sadly i didn't manage close enough to the word count for this to count. But also not sure this does count as not cliche, i feel like most happy endings are, but then,

Full post: The bit that matters: Song: Soft Smoke Album: Hot Pink Artist: The Pink Spiders “With your back to the wall you’re going to be the lonely one, if you dance all night, you’re going to be loved.”

ohhhh thank you so much! that was entirely heart! And oh my word! You are so gunna make me happy cry at work! hey, hey marco... I am so very more than happy with the prize for writing... so I have an idea...

It's the hardest thing - slicing up, cutting down, taking out, stifling and knowing that all of what you wanted maybe isn't in there. I can understand what you mean, because to you, you read it and see

let's blame the constellations and planets, it worked for kings of old, and i mean, they were kings ;)

Awww dude thank you!!! <3 I wasn't meaning it like that, more that these deserve plenty more love than they got, although am equally feeling like a pile of pants this week, so thank you <3

To be fair, I wrote one of my favorite stories following a loss last year but I think that was somehow different, this time I had a lot of emotions i was finding it harder to process and being able to

Seen some awesome posts worthy of a bit more love this week @felt.buzz although none are mine, I did look over the translation for one, hope that's okay ;) A poem that captures one of those feelings, forever

It's always easier when there are a couple of votes in already, can't really split a vote when I'm the first one in. Damn. Okay. Can't even vote tactically so much anymore, you guys are too good at outwitting

The perspective you have chosen to cut to here brings to much to this story, at first it could be days later, but then as the realisation hits it had been decades and something dreadful must have happened.