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Doesn't have a bot. Welcome to unreality where what you see is not the same for me everything forms subjectively and things aren’t quite what they ought to be
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finishthestory
2019-07-17 18:38
RE: When The Tundra Calls (Finish The Story #58 Entry)
Ahh that was it exactly, when I saw the title the call had to be alive! I was tempted to name my ending Don't Answer but didn't want to give their fate away. Oh thank you so much <3<3
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finishthestory
2019-07-17 18:30
RE: When The Tundra Calls (Finish The Story #58 Entry)
Yeah very much so, the times I went through and lost 20 words here and there so I could add another bit I needed, I could have spent 500 words on each bit, it was too tempting a prompt. I put a lot of
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finishthestory
2019-07-17 18:11
RE: When The Tundra Calls (Finish The Story #58 Entry)
You have exactly understood how I wrote this in a way that has made me think about it myself. I have heard many a mention of the old show/tell in writing, and it never occurred to me, but this is one I
calluna
finishthestory
2019-07-17 17:51
RE: When The Tundra Calls (Finish The Story #58 Entry)
You had me dreaming this. I woke up the day after posting it trying to remember what TV series I was hooking on, only to be let down by the realisation that it was just in my head. But that one word, tasted,
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palnet
2019-07-17 15:54
RE: When the Tundra Calls
The open image of aspen leaf miners, the mazes etched into every leaf over the forest is such a strong image to open on, the hollowing of the heart of the forest, and it going unnoticed! The lack of
calluna
finishthestory
2019-07-17 15:18
RE: When The Tundra Calls - Oivas’ Entry
ohhhhhhh! ohhhhh damnnn Oivas this full on got me! You take us into the depths, and with a story put together so well there is, like the boys find when the dog runs off, no turning back. The idea of the
calluna
finishthestory
2019-07-17 15:02
RE: Finish the Story Contest - Week #58!
As if i wouldn't ;) always enjoy musing over how you convey so much in so little. I am hooked on the description which isn't always a bad thing just need to find the balance you strike so well, the skill
calluna
finishthestory
2019-07-17 14:38
RE: When The Tundra Calls / Remnants - Finish the Story Contest #58
You open in wonder, and contrast it so beautiful with the harsh reality. Aladdin, and the familiar sense of amazement and magic, and possibility of something greater against Gennadiy, thinking of his father,
calluna
contest
2019-07-16 13:20
RE: Finish The Story Contest - Week #58!
I won't argue, this is a beautiful gushing gif, from the master himself, and there is no competing with him.
calluna
finishthestory
2019-07-16 12:15
RE: When The Tundra Calls (Finish The Story #58 Entry)
OH!!! Thank you guys so so much!!
calluna
finishthestory
2019-07-15 16:08
RE: Finish the Story Contest - Week #58!
Oh! I am so very glad you set the bar on this one <3 damn, you better let us see the full 2000. This is so well rooted, the way you drawn on the wider environment, the setting, growing the banter and
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contest
2019-07-14 16:09
RE: Finish The Story Contest - Week #58!
Thank you very much for this opening @f3nix, there's so much in it, it's been niggling away at my mind, cooking up a story and i very much appreciated that here's my entry
calluna
tellastorytome
2019-07-14 14:13
RE: Tell A Story To Me - Extension - 5 Days Left To Enter - Water World
<3
calluna
letsmakeacollage
2019-07-12 06:11
RE: Ravenous
I probably over thought it and under explained but I didn't want to put too much of what I thought here, but I am worried I under sold your story now. I was more meaning how in having to find someone every
calluna
finishthestory
2019-07-10 15:22
RE: Shiro (Finish The Story #57 Entry)
#sbi-skip
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finishthestory
2019-07-10 14:51
RE: Shiro- The Cursed My Entry for #finishthestory
thank you <3 got a review with a new specialist coming up so hopefully that will go somewhere, very much enjoy the horror fantasy escape here, I keep missing things, so make sure to let me know if you
calluna
finishthestory
2019-07-10 13:57
RE: Shiro - Finish The Story #57
Oh, oh gaby! This is just so well done, tinged with melancholy and lament, and her not even noticing what she was losing. The light falling on the broken figurine, all it represents, its just so perfect.
calluna
finishthestory
2019-07-10 13:41
RE: The Watchers
I just adore the trippy dreamscape nature of this, and how well it ties into the first half! You pick this up seamlessly, and instead of decoding, you build up, letting the parts you write explain what
calluna
letsmakeacollage
2019-07-10 13:20
RE: Ravenous
Oh my! What a burden he carries, forced to turn them loose to prevent them attacking just anyone, all he can do is chose who dies, and in doing so, chose who is spared. Gosh this has got too deep into
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finishthestory
2019-07-10 13:15
RE: Shiro (Finish The Story #57 Entry)
haha glad you appreciated it, but I will confess, i do know a polar bear called Shiro so not that clever ;) it was fun to side step the horror, but I did seriously wish I had chance to write a proper horror
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