Something i just have to ask, how do you, as the artist, know which one is Persephone?

Dialog writing is very important to get done early... cause, if you fly by the seat of you pants, you can paint yourself into some corners where you are forced to reboot the comic or delete a chapter. And that is rather jarring to the reader. What really gets me is how easy it is to get caught going down a one way street (so to speak); the consequences of particular dialog at the beginning of a chapter.

Happy born day. I hope it is a pleasant day. Enjoy the sites of California, it really is a beautiful state... while you still can, while you are still allowed to travel without a pass... Prisoner #5.