Hi @mawit07 & @revisesociology! Firstly let me apologise for directly tagging you both.

I was hoping you could offer me some advice on my writing as I really like the way you both write and how engaged your readers are to what you post.

Are there any tips you could share on my post as I thought it looked ok? Is it too long or too short? Or maybe not so relevant?

Thanks for any help you can share :D