What an amazing piece of work. Everything came together so well, and I loved the theme. Your voice worked perfectly with the rhythm. My favorite part was the subtly quickening tempo at the end, along with

Wow! This is a beautiful piece of writing. The rhythm and word choice is great. Last stanza is my favorite, especially the first two lines Inferno scorched the softness into brute solidity Patterns of

Thank you for the feedback :) I added in a picture for this one that kind of goes along with the poem and is a bit eye catching.

It rolls and rolls Dragging my limp form Across jagged stones This was my favorite stanza. Enjoyed this poem. I would describe it as an embodiment of the word "malaise". You can just feel the

I love the imagery you use, you really bring the words to life. I love seeing the transformation of the stanza from the first poem to this one. A lot of the time when I want to write but don't have

It is amazing how easily we can be divided on demand by the media industrial complex. The empathy, energy, and idealism of the youth weaponized to perpetuate polarization and social decay rather than growth.

I love the fourth photograph, the one with Emma Nicole boat, so much. Something about the water, and the way it contrasts with the sky is so beautiful. I keep scrolling up to look at it. Very cool :) Love