Great colours ! Have a !PIZZA !

Thank you! !LUV

Thank you for the LUV @stickupboys ! xx

Hi @ministickupboy !Luv and !PIZZA for You ! xxxxxxxx

Poor little thing. Hope you can look after him Have some love and pizza !ILUV !PIZZA

What a beautiful cat! 😻

Thank you. Thank you 😍😍

ILUV U 2. !LUV We need lots of love in the world today ! 😍😍

I like this story ! Unexpected final outcome. Have a !PIZZA ! (rather than beans!)

Great colours ! Have a slice of !PIZZA !

Lovely cats ! Have a !PIZZA !

Thank you everyone for your comments. Bit too much to take on board for a second draft.

Hard comments ! I'll take them on board .

Thank you for your comments . Very useful . The image is my own from a hanging from India .

Thank you ! The pink rose is called Nostalgie. The pink colours change as it ages . Very attractive

Thank you! It has been raining today so all well in the garden!

Thank you. The prompt made me think. I am thinking where it goes from here !

I like this story . The tension builds up well and the final memory and statement leads you to think. Will they meet again?. Well done!

I am not sure of your age or background, but this story reads of lots of teenage angst and a lot of 'Americanisms' (which you may have intended!) . It read to me as something written quickly . Was it?

A very personal story . It would be nice to think all relationships have a happy ending. I did not think it was very well written. Bit slapdash. Needs some work on the story and language.