My attempt

You are a good story teller. Keep writing.

Good attemp. Keep writing.

Hi Renazara welcome to steemit, its nice to see you are also interested in reading and writing. Here on steemit you can find so many writing contests and activities which will hep you to improve your writing.

Hi Kevin I know little bit Deutsch. Wilkommen in der Steemit.

Hi Erika, welcome to steemit, you have of a great sense of photography, it seems you are pro.

Thanks for the compliment. Ive visited your profile you are also a great writer.

Life is a game. You have to learn how to play well, once you have mastered the game of life, "fame"," money", and "respect" will be for you forever.

my attempt:

Such a sweet compliment.

I didn't understand. What thing take a lot of work? my article or success?

Thanks for taking time and reading my article.

I am glad you like it

here is my attempt

Here is my attempt