RE: RE: Mizu No Oto- Every Image Has Its Haiku - Edition #43 (English)
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RE: Mizu No Oto- Every Image Has Its Haiku - Edition #43 (English)

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Are you sure? Ichibutsu jitate is one only image flowing through the entire haiku. Furthermore, here's a little too much overthinking and conceptualism... I would have expressed the same thing in a way similar to this:

man hands shape
green plants and grey stone
in straight lines

@bananafish: Are you sure? | Ecency