Dear @mgaft1, I'm so sorry you might have felt a little left apart on this entry to our 64th edition but the reason is.. You posted after the deadline and even after the winner's post! No worries, we have always a FtS running and the # 65 is out and lead by our amazing @brisby in case you want to give it a try 😉 You can always find the deadlines at the bottom of our starting post. Anyways, welcome to the Realms of Bananafish! Your story is like a stream of consciousness and I believe it is an excellent and original choice, considering the first person narrative of the first half. Keep writing with us and maybe see you in our discord channel. Cheers! - f3nix