Terrific work, Sarez!

Your details flush out the scene, giving a reader a feeling of being there with Arnav while the devious Brenda carries out her duties. His distraction and attraction to her raises suspicion. Is she truly that appealing or is there something more at play here? (The room having the feeling of a lounge with the plush leather recliners has already primed his mind away from the clinical into a more relaxed feel - a very well done piece of subtlety.)

Arnav leaves, feeling most satisfied and you close with an great unnerving twist. It was all just a front for an intricate plot designed to gain control over the masses who would line up willingly for a cosmetic procedure. Dystopian to the max (and I love it) Sarez!