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7y
Obviously, the Aladdin simile was a little stroke of genius and an effective hook. I also loved the oxymoronic idea of an "obsolete alien technology". A fresh and entertaining entry with a lot of action, good dialogues, a twist and the final cliffhanger. What could I ask more? :-D
RE: When The Tundra Calls / Remnants - Finish the Story Contest #58