RE: RE: Break- My Entry for #finishthestory
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RE: Break- My Entry for #finishthestory

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congrats on the curie@curie vote!

This sounds like a real shit party! I audibly gasped when he struck the woman with the stone.

"Kill, Kill, Kill- Kill, Kill, Kill" The shout was wreaking Sean's sanity and he was already loosing his grip on reality; he knew this, understood this helplessly; in no position to recognize that the shouts were not "Kill" but "Bill"

I thought this was a believable way to induce 'the crazy voices' trope alongside something more realistic.

Poor Sean, and all the others. What a sad night and ending!

@bananafish: congrats on the | Ecency