RE: RE: City of Gold- My Entry for Tellastorytome
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RE: City of Gold- My Entry for Tellastorytome

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Your world setting skills are incredible, the way you establish characters, within a few lines, a world feels real and developed, and the people feel rooted in them. To open a story with so much information in one sentence, in the hands of a less skilled author, could be off putting, here, it’s like throwing a window wide open into your world, and shouting look, look. A breath of fresh air grabs me, and i have to see every detail you have laid out.

This is such a plausible story, that without an ounce of blood or gore, or a hint of a monster, it is true horror. Given the enthusiasm for fracking, and total disregard for any consequences of all kinds of other initiatives that will make big money, and human and environmental cost, here in the UK, banking that the operation would go ahead despite the chances of destroying whatever records may be there. But… this is a very good plan sarez@sarez… immaculately thought out, well written, gripping, touches of satire to balance addressing a very serious issue in a call to revolution that is framed in a way that really hits the heart... a very good plan… in fact how are your satellite photoshopping skills…?

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