Your design is even more fabulous than the last one, although the two complement each other, but the story got me thinking about lots of things. Firstly, as I was reading, I was transported back to that moment as if it were a science fiction film, and I love that genre. Every detail made me feel like I was part of the story.

On the other hand, the subject matter remains fascinating: several people with fragmented minds, yet at the same time possessing special and powerful abilities, that’s what has really captivated me. Excellent!🤗