If you were to ask why it is I note corrections needed, I might say it is almost compulsive, as I hate it when I see in my own writings that I slipped up and no one noticed. It suggests that no one cared enough about my story to either notice or to correct me.

With you, there is another reason. I am hoping you prepare a collection of the 20 or 50 stories of yours that you like the best. If you do, it would be nice if you do not have to also make corrections.

So...I'm waiting
:)

In this para, 2 commas where there should be full stops - I've placed them in brackets):

Obviously, I’m haunted, but willingly succumb to the experience of being possessed. It’s a comforting feeling sensing her warmth and presence(,) Truth is, I’ve been isolated ever since my breakup with Mara Cervantes and the loss of our circle of friends. They had to choose sides and chose her(,) Can’t say I blame them.