I am sorry, but just out of curiosity, do you have another account in the name of @sarez.

Coincidentally or not the story and the characters resembles to the one I read last week for the same story telling. Check this link https://steemit.com/finishthestory/@sarez/break-my-entry-for-finishthestory#@angelro/ptv63p.

I clearly remembers the names and the hero in the end Sean is hitting hid forehead in the rock and the end of the story with the girl.

I searched all over my comments to pick the link to read it again that both are having the same plot. And even that was too shortlisted by @curie..

Any how this story too looks good.