Wow, well done on this story!! You really had everything come together in the end, in a way I did not see coming. I like how you're keeping it scary right to the end, making the reader unsure whether Jacques can be trusted. The doll head is such a strange, but nicely standing out item, making us curious how it will fit in with the rest...

By the way, can I ask you. How do you get to put up to ten tags for your post? And is there a difference between posting in hive and peakd?