That last part had me hooting with laughter!! I would have so much fun with James :)
I love the dialogue in this chapter. You're a genius with how you weave politics and entertaining human personalities. I could totally see this science fiction story being an awesome TV show series. I'm so curious about what Pink is up to. I get the sense that she's not a victim or being held hostage, wherever she is. Hmmm...
RE: A Rat in a Top Hat