I think you're doing great with describing the magic of human connection :) Your words and the characters have life and realness to them. And you spell out the authoritarian oppression in ways that are understandable. I can follow what's happening, and I see how events and stories are building off each other day by day. I'm delighted to be on the receiving end of your fantastic writing. And I'm not saying this just because I'm wildly smitten by you too :) That's definitely a part of it. But clearly you have a deep talent and skill for this truly creative and visionary work.