RE: RE: Going-to-the-Sun
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RE: Going-to-the-Sun

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stop over-critiquing my work

Yes!!!

I knew he was going to delete those photos :)

Sleeping on the couch is a nice touch. He is not ready to move on, so he can't sleep in the bed. However, as he scrolls through the shots at the end, he is sleeping in the bed. Best symbolism imaginable.

Your tone is kind of meandering, the way most of us live our lives. We go from this thought to that and somehow connections are made that don't seem obvious. The mind and the heart work all the time...we just have to let the process go forward.

Plan B, indeed. Sometimes, we have to just let that happen. Great story, samsmith1971@samsmith1971

@agmoore: stop over-critiquing | Ecency