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Wow! I think some people would prefer hell to your concept of death. Some people fear nothingness more than anything else. I call to mind the end of Pier Gynt (Ibsen). The worst end Pier can think of being melted down by the button maker--of being dispatched to nothingness. There is a horror to that.

I loved this piece. I fault it only with its brevity. Fascinating ideas here.