Don't apologize. I am worried about brisby...is she OK?

About my story: You know we write who we are. I'm pretty mature and have certain interests. So, some of the light fantasy (especially the grotesque and bloody) isn't my inclination. The challenge is to follow my inclination and be true to the beginning. So mine might seem like brisby man·qué, but it is true to her beginning.
I appreciate that you gave feedback :) Be well and peaceful. Every day.