RE: RE: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku - Edition #35 (English)
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RE: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku - Edition #35 (English)

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Hi Marco,
I'm not in the mood for the city, as my haiku will show :)I just looked at you syllable count. I thought 5/7/5 was classic haiku. However, if that is not right, the second version will serve. This has the 3/5/3 count. Same sense, less words :)

Dissonance. Bustle.
Red. White. Black. Grey. The city.
Flowers blossom---where?


Dissonance
White. Grey. The City.
Flowers--Where?

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