@theironfelix: I highlighted one sentence when I read your piece, but wasn't sure I should address that. But I will now.

First of all, holistically, your piece employs acoustics dramatically and effectively. The visuals were also striking, but I think the acoustics always set your pieces apart.

The sentence that struck me:

I am not a sir, I do not understand the infatuation to think or to proceed all mysterious people with a male pronoun.

Can I tell you the number of times in my life when I've objected to that pronoun? Not because I'm transgender, but because I refuse to be pigeon-holed by gender identification. And I don't get why the default gender is male. It used to be infuriating when I was young and had more energy (🙂). Now it's just objectionable. I think gender is individual and personal. Nobody should make assumptions about anybody else based on gender.

So there's the comment I held back. You asked for it :)

Whatever you do in your absence from Steemit, I wish you happiness and peace.