The trench font is perfect keeping in view the word choice and i get the idea. The color choice is nice and i thinks it works wonderfully. But, may i offer that the trailing length may need increasing a little and being more chaotic might offer a more feel of speed. The current icon has more of a floating not dashing towards something feel. Which could be intended. I also get the space shipiness of the icon. Intended or not i noticed that is all. And it matches the overall feel. (: