Hi, @nattybongo. Allow me to tell you a few points which can enhance your blogging experience in the Steemit platform.

• In terms of the article's content, I think you can add up some point about glaucoma, other than it being the silent thief of sight. I'm sure not everyone is aware of this month being a glaucoma month and to make matter worst, some of us don't even know what glaucoma is. We only knew the word. Give us (readers) the benefit of knowledge and you will attract plenty of readers in no time.

• The first image that you've used, even though you've cited its source, can't be used for commercial purposes unless you have written consent from the GRF:

Permission to otherwise reprint, copy, electronically reproduce, or utilize any document on this website, in part or in whole, is expressly prohibited unless prior written consent is obtained from GRF.

Be extremely careful when you want to use any image for your article. There are some sites like Pixabay and Pexel which provide various images which are free to use.

If you have any problem regarding STEM-related articles, you can join steemSTEM Discord Channel and we will be glad to assist you.