First of all, your TCP ports seem closed
Then, you listen on 127.0.0.1 (localhost) which is unreachable from the outside. You need to modify the config.ini
I also don't see any activation of your witness or vote? what did you use as your account name?
You can have a look at some of my post if it can help you (I did a complete documentation of the hf23 installation a long time ago) or at my last two post on my node running on the testnet