This is a great setting

Like everywhere in Zeelis, there was no respite from noise. Outside, the rebuilding efforts created a wave of machine chaos; churning, drilling, hammering, and blasting.

I like how you let the world come out organically throughout the story, but each paragraph is nicely chiseled and packed with information. It has a sense of epic proportions like the grand space dramas of yore. Very nicely written.