Thank you, but I had to think long and hard before writing this.
Right now, for me, it 'tells' the story instead of having the characters reveal it by what they say and do.
You are right, creative writing is not my thing, I love reading it but putting it together is another thing. I hope to develop myself this year, hopefully, i will learn how to develop characters instead of telling the story
Thank you for your comment, I appreciate it.