What a funny, suspenseful and imaginative story! I love Alice's tenacity and courage. If only she'd seen when Guy was almost taken, probably she would have saved him. But really, who goes looking for aliens in a rugged terrain? Not me! 😅 Unlike Alice and Guy, if I saw a double-headed green alien, I think I'll run faster than super hero, Flash.
The Harrisons are a brave and curious couple. Too bad they got sucked into 'the eye'. I hope Alice finds Guy probably in an alien paradise or something because I'm wondering where does 'the eye' leads to. I enjoyed reading your story. Take care and have a great day.
!PIMP