Intrigues! / ¡Intrigas! A 5 minute freewrite


The crime scene was complicated, Beatriz had remained next to the corpse without being able to do anything, some men who were sitting at one of the tables as soon as they heard the outrageous screams of that woman seeing the recumbent on the floor they left. Immediately the manager called the paramedics and the police. The ambulance arrived in five minutes followed by the police car. When they saw the spectacle of the corpse, they began to question those present.

Everyone, still surprised by the moment, began to formulate intrigues as to why that murder had occurred.

It was still not clear where the deadly bullet that killed that man had come from.

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La escena del crimen se complicó, Beatriz se había quedado junto al cadáver sin poder hacer nada, unos hombres que estaban sentados en una de las mesas en cuanto escucharon los gritos atroces de esa mujer al ver al yacente en el piso se fueron. Inmediatamente, el gerente llamó a los paramédicos y a la policía. La ambulancia llegó a los cinco minutos seguida por la patrulla. Cuando vieron el espectáculo del cadáver, comenzaron a interrogar a los presentes.
Todos, aún sorprendidos por el momento, comenzaron a formular intrigas sobre por qué había ocurrido ese asesinato.
Todavía no estaba claro de dónde había venido la bala mortal que mató a ese hombre.

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This is my entry for the Sunday´s 5 minute freewrite challenge of @mariannewest. If you want to participate here you have the rules at the following link.

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