RE: I Need Help!!!

I really enjoyed your story, I can feel your anxiety while writing. writing requires special skills and high patience, I tried to do this by participating in a contest in the Hive Learners community, it really opened my horizons about writing a story so that it could be conveyed to readers. As a beginner I don't know what criticism to give because I am amazed by your very good and easy to understand delivery. Keep writing and trying new things to improve your skills. Have a nice day.