#Freewrite: Classroom Windows to the Adventures (Short Story)

Few children look up an airplane from the classroom, excited for an adventure.

This short is written for $freewrite challenge "Day 47" prompt: Airplane. This time the story took me 5 minutes, but I made corrections after these five mins so consider it took me 7 mins or so...

It also can't make a full (short-)story alone, but I still think it's an interesting conversation...

Classroom Windows to the Adventures

"It's an airplane!! an airplane!!"

As I heard him I went as fast as I could to the window. "It's beautiful..."

"Hey, what's the interesting in that..." the glass wearing classmate pt her hands on my shoulder. "we see it like-- everyday or something?"

"Not everyday you nerd!!" shouted the energetic boy "These planes leave the country you know?! it's an adventure."

"you..." I looked to him, hoped I was wrong. "..want to leave the country too?"

"Yup!! I want to go to all sorts of adventures." He showed me-- Us the biggest smile. "You should go too."

"If I could..." I would like to go with you everywhere... I didn't say that part. "Lets ride a plane when we grow up."

[The End?]


Hope you liked it... I thin k the title is so good that it doesn't suit a story like this (wh9ich is sad).... It's based on something happened to me when I was young, but nothing in this actually happened... I imagine the main character here as a girl but it can be read as both genders... I tried to make her shy but its hard to do with words alone in 5 minutes.

What do you think?

Picture is from Pinterest. I don't own it or know the original owner...
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