Hi @mybest. Thank you for sharing your story in The Ink Well. However, we must ask that you comply with our community rules. You can find them on our home page.

Specifically, all of your images need to be replaced with license-free and creative commons images, such as from Pixabay, Pexels and Unsplash. You cannot take images you find online or in image searches. They are copyrighted, and cannot be used. So please read our rules and find different images. (And these rules apply to ALL posts on Hive.) For example, this image contains a watermark to prevent people from using it without paying for it:

We hope you will comply with our rules, and continue to join our community. You have a good storytelling style. The story has a good conflict, with the boyfriend canceling his plans, and a nice resolution with the narrator getting to see fireworks for the first time and forgetting about her problems. To improve the grammatical quality of your work, we recommend our writing tips on grammar, which will help you to spot your errors.