I like how your conversational style creates intimacy, making me feel directly addressed and involved. I liked the informal language best.

Man what a good poem. Your imagery of life as a stripper immediately drew me in and the ending blew me away. As someone who suffers from bi-polar it was very relateable. I love how it embracces the darker

It's ok I laughed at the one about women getting evacuated -

your poem made me laugh with it's unflinching honesty :) Of course I get that its more then about just cleaning - "dirty windows that blur my sight" speaks to an inner turmoil. This builds nicelly

Your poem has an authentic voice that comes over very strongly, I should say determinedly. Your theme of inner knowing is a good one.

So easy to read. It felt like a chat you might have with someone you've met along the road. "Oh, don't mind me". Your ongoing theme of going or coming home is deeply relateble. Altho your line

Ah shucks friend

Thanks for your lovely comment.

Interesting take. Thanks for reading and sharing. It's been completley ignored in t h Western press.

Thanks for reading

Your poem beautifully captures the essence of love stripped of its grandiose promises. The notion of not promising eternal love is refreshing. It acknowledges the realities of human relationships while

You use vibrant imagery, especially with phrases like "set my lips on fire" and "fire that dances, shadow in my heart." These metaphors vividly convey the intensity of the emotions

Yep celery for me today lol

Your poem belies a profound sense of vulnerability, inviting the reader into a space where emotional turbulence is palpable

Your idea of seeking validation while wrestling with integrity is universally relatable, allowing readers from various walks of life to connect deeply with the sentiments expressed.

Thank you very much

Ah thanks, your comment put a big smile on my face

Thanks for sharing, I've had a read. Interesting how the Japanese bond holders threat to sell Treasuries have forced another U-turn by the Trump admin.

Thanks for reading and leaving a nice comment

Your piece captures the complexity of human emotion, balancing between despair and hope. Your poem has a deeply personal touch, capturing the sensation of waiting in silence and yearning for change. Very