Your poem dances gracefully between longing and farewell. I enjoyed all the nature imagery, the wind, the sea, the moon reflecting as they do the emotions of the piece.

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Delightful. I particularly liked the imagery of the breeze was a cradle.

The repetitions help give your piece a chant like melody and your exploration of higher timelines and enlightenment invites readers to reflect on their own journeys.

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It is frustrating seeing others get the big votes and think how come it's not me. Currently I'm just enjoying having an outlet and making connections with similar writers. One of my communities (Blockchain

your narrative arc comes through strongly - moving from the father's regret, moving through the daughter's growing awareness, to their eventual confrontation. I think this is its greatest strength and

your poem combines the ethereal with profound introspection, beautifully encapsulating a search for a love that feels both illuminating and just beyond reach...

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Thank you for such an uplifting poem. I particularly liked the lines 'For every time you think you'll fail.. Go harder, twice as you have imagined.. '. Your conversational tone made it sound like you were

I really like the sentiment of your poem, and how we have both used words and books in our poems. The metaphor of ink as a medium for capturing love and it's impermanence is lovely. It flows very well

It's funny but newspaper headlines stating after obviously not reading the 80,000 odd pages released that it was definitely just Oswald. Not the CIA! No involvement from Israel either. Move on folks nothing

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Your poem's opening is really strong. The simple yet powerful act of holding back tears embodies the experience of heartbreak in a relatable way. Poignant stuff.

I really enjoyed your poem about the pineapple seller and your theme was also good - showing the ripple effect of positivity and personal improvement.

This is complex. You convey a deep sense of loss and longing. The transition from beauty to despair is palpable.

What a beautiful poem/lyrics. Your use of sensory details is especially noteworthy, 'Sunlight filters through curtains' and 'the world soaked in melting snow' evoked for me vivid visuals, I could see,

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Your 'whore has the whole damned country by the balls' is a great line, arresting and sharp with social commentary.

I found "Another hand, another hold, / Another love, for a moment sold" is particularly striking, capturing the transient nature of connections that are often fleeting and superficial.