Your narrative voice is strong. The conversational tone you adopt engages the reader, almost as if it's a dialogue with the self. This approach enhances the relatability of the experience expressed. Nicely

I always enjoy some personification and here your moon and stars are transformed into silent witnesses. I think your technique has added depth and enriched your piece.

Loved hearing about the goss between Trump and Rosie - does give them that more human perspective

Thanks for your interesting history. I love how international our site is. As a UK resident I can only say I can agree the time changes are a pain. No real discussion in the UK to change anything. The

Good thoughts. He does flip flop - he might say keeping his enemies on their toes - and he does have enemies. One has to ask, do Oligarchs like chaos? Is it an environment in which they can personally

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Your welcome, I think you have a very talented voice, keep writing :)

What do you think about geo-engineering? I think it's a bigger danger to the planet than their 'climate change'.

A touching and relatable poem. Your vine metaphor, he keeps his vibes like a vine, I thought was very fitting given how vines are associated with growth and resilience. But also vines often associated

Beautiful as ever, each word carefully chosen. I liked the ink in the rain which with the image of time is like a desert speaks to the impermanence of things. Did you try 'the memories fade away, the lyrics

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Your poem shines with genuine warmth and love. I especially liked the line 'where i start my conversation from'. It is down to your conversational tone that it feels so intimate.

I loved your poem's musicality, especially the catchy refrain of the title. I thought the contrast between the “bitter” and “honey” was particularly evocative, symbolizing transformation and growth.

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i enjoyed the content of your poem. For me it really picked up from 'So much is involved in this business of mine.' It was all the examples of hard work that goes to showcase your deep love for your craft

I found your poem to be well structured. It starts off very strong with the finger bite. It moves the reader then from infatuation to realisation. I especially liked the line 'I was in love, blinded and

Yes weather is a major conversation topic and we say the same thing here in the UK. I liked the poems familiar touch.

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I like how your setting - the beach - evokes a contrast to the emotional landscape. Your poem speaks with emotional depth and the theme of friendship is relatable and grounding.