I truly appreciate your time spent looking over my work.

Even on vacation I find time to read and write a little. Funny how vacation used to mean reading an entire book.

This would explain a lot.

Best advice, it's on you.

I love that you include "I gave them all away". This reveals the character, how he relates to fishing and maybe life.

The visuals really enhance the piece. Kudos!

Are you assuming writing comes from memory? My most pleasurable moments in writing are the ones that come from nowhere, like a delightful break from reality. It is true that I write from real events at

Your use of oxymoron is great, innocent lie is very effective.

No doubt writing is good for your brain.

Fate is hard to accept. There is no rewind, only forward...as far as we know.

Trying something different. I have written ten books in various genres. Each one offers it's own reward, but this one was weird for me. Ah, growing, experimenting.

Finding out you have health concerns on a climb sounds terrible.

Loving the prompts. Thank you.

I like the last one best. Especially like that people are damn sneaky, because they are!