Welcome back, and good to see you, @amritadeva! I'm not sure it was The Ink Well that was here two years ago. It is too new for that. :-) Some writing communities have come and gone from the platform.
Your story is very powerful. I like how it built to such an impactful climactic scene, but is set in a peaceful backdrop of a pleasant trip to the sea. You have a very readable storytelling style.
As for your interest in more involvement and writing feedback, we have had whispers of how we might make such a thing work behind the scenes and are discussing future plans. It's good to know that there is interest!
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