Maybe you should write a story about the giant pink snake. :P

My brain keeps wanting to change your first sentence from "she always was afraid..." to "she was always afraid to put her feet over the edge of the bed." It's an arifact from my writing classes.

Can you elaborate on this? It's a free write so I can't exactly change it unless I write a second draft, but it's good to know why you think it should maybe be changed.

Also, I have a ton of followers from before I was active, but I don't know how many are still active. I need to learn how this place works now and work on joining communities. Preferably ones that aren't overwhelming with requirements to curate posts and put signatures on every post and stuff like that.