Thank you. I hadn't even thought about it coinciding with Father's Day, probably not the best story for it.

Here’s my entry. Finally got it finished.

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Thank you for the win. You gave is such a good prompt @brisby. :) I feel bad for not voting now, but I like to read everything before casting a vote and I just ran out of time this week.

Here be my entry for the long awaited return of FTS with round 53 :) thank you @brisby for a great intro

This is a really great story, you set the pace well and made me feel for Tired Pete, and you included the prompt word skillfully. :)

Thank you for the link :) I include vdux whenever there is a round open.

You maintain the voyeurism throughout the story which makes us wonder if we should be watching the woman or not. Your description of her is very detailed and you carry the sorrow she is feeling. Great

This is a great story, you really captured that feeling of melancholy and you cleverly told the reader the perspective we were reading was that of Brandy. Well done :)

The sun will appear Sunrise happens everyday Reliable sun

Deep Pink Space

Wedding bells ringing signature on crisp paper Till death do we part

A higher power An invisible caress Believe in spirit

Falling to the ground Adrenaline flourishes Friendly hand protects

Walk along the path Towards uncertainty, but to a guiding hand

Here is my entry :)

Thank you :) it's nice to see your thought process as you read it. I love leaving stories with cliffhangers, keep the reader guessing. :)

My entry:

Here's a little entry:

I hadn't even thought about cross social posting (and I'm supposed to be in marketing)