Ciao @cyberspacegod! Better late than never as they say 😛 I like the "Bananafish servant Marco" looks very 1984 haha cheers!

The action sequences are chained in an improbable way and look like a surreal carousel. The characters and the scene remind me of Bukowski in a Kafkian sauce. I like it!

Wow that was what I call a deep critique! Thanks for being this week's master of ceremony @dirge and congrats to everyone here for making the Bananafish community an awesome place!

Broski, it's just a blurb from my dusty philosophic reminescences (20 years ago! WTF decades are passing like eating nuts). But I admit that your words are always so inspiring. Those are the three phases

When are you joining the Bananafish army on discord, @sidequest? 🤠

Panta rei, everything flows. This poetry takes me to Eraclitus, one of my favorite philosophers. I love the awakening from the third stanza onward. The personification is smooth and I think that your choice

The teeth's trope is always a must.

Stay away.

A frying pan came flying I think I had to read this three times and this unexpected twist hit my head too right in the middle of my eyes (but the watermelon is still intact, more or less).

Ahh those good ol' bank robberies! I don't think I could have imagined a more gruesome couple than that represented by Terry and his unsettling uncle.

I like the Reservoir Dogs' taste you gave to the story. Terry, a man plenty of contradictions. I wonder about his relation with Diddler after the happening.

I think I remember that you're a writer? Your mom told me something once, I guess. I don't know how much time you have to dedicate here on steemit but it would be nice to see you in our discord server

Betting on the winners with a betting bot or simply like this ? Both ways that would be such fun!

XD! Pay attention to handle them!

I didnt follow much this edition but if I was you I would have surely raised hell proportionally to the cuteness of the prompt.

I love your writing style! Welcome to the realms of the Big Yellow, @zeldacroft. I'm sure that, giving them time, the peeps will manage to twist your story in something creepy 😜

Will you ever finish the Banana-gifs? Maybe that will be the sign of a potassium apocalypse.. We should build a legend or a prophecy around this 🤔

My vote goes to @sidequest as he promised me that I will be allowed to become an emotional toothpaste (and, if not, I still may join the salesforce).

Don't mess with Shiro, his Dugglins, and his imagination! The rings – the emerald, ruby, diamond and sapphire – each on each finger The infinity gems in the Bananafish Realms!!!

This is Volibear, one of my favorite picks between League of Legends' champs and the personification of Grizz in my mind while I was reading. Your ending was fun, fast paced, and somehow it reminded me